tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5214150937423438761.post434691298955640945..comments2023-10-22T04:28:03.235-07:00Comments on Joseph Timmons: A Poem to My Wife: EvermoreAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05035419802488523895noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5214150937423438761.post-22925193158610624332008-11-22T19:33:00.000-08:002008-11-22T19:33:00.000-08:00Thank youI value your comments because I feel you ...Thank you<BR/>I value your comments because I feel you can understand the messege conveyed, and seeing is that you are also a man of passionate words, I would be honored if my works were even close to what you would consider good.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05035419802488523895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5214150937423438761.post-87964736095926945192008-11-18T21:56:00.000-08:002008-11-18T21:56:00.000-08:00Your poem conveys deep emotion.Some of the Strong ...Your poem conveys deep emotion.<BR/><BR/>Some of the <BR/>Strong lines--<BR/>a young woman with a fire and thirst A look of desire that holds me where I am<BR/><BR/>I tend to you I attend to your garden<BR/><BR/>(I like the play with 'tend' and 'attend'. And the very original creative phrase brings new power to the traditional metaphor of 'garden.')<BR/><BR/>The sweet waters of your pleasure<BR/><BR/>(This line has such emotional power!)<BR/><BR/>GREAT LINE--<BR/>I raise you up upon the altar of my affections<BR/><BR/>Thanks for sharing such a beautiful and romantic poem.<BR/><BR/>Daniel WilcoxDaniel Wilcoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05178375087492786696noreply@blogger.com